Since 2011, the university education is free of charge in whole Germany. However, there is no shortage of debate nationally as well as internationally until this day whether university education should be charged (again). However, in my opinion, a well-developed and equal society and a strong economy needs a free academic education. I feel this way for main reason, which I will explore in the following essay.
The point to be mentioned first is that university education needs to be free to bridge the gap between poor and rich. Especially in countries, such as United Kingdom and United States of America, many students from poor or middle class families must take a big loan from the bank to afford a university education. Moreover, these students will start with high amount of debts in their professional life and thus do not have the same conditions as students with more money. However, by eliminating the charges for university education, many students from poor background will be motivated to choose an academic education. My own experience is compelling example for this. At 2011, I was in the high school and was almost ready to start apprentice in a financial institution, because the fee for the universities in Germany was too high for me and my family. However, with the change in legislation, I put my whole effort in graduating high school with the best marks possible to study electrical engineering. For this reason, I think academic education must be free to create equality and fairness in nowadays society.
Secondly, free university education will not only improve the inequality in the country’s society, but will also improve the economy of the nation. By providing education for everyone, there will be highly educated people, which are the heart and the engine of a nation’s economy. For instance, in the last couple of years, Norway has brought highly educated students, improved the economy immensely and it is now one of the most prosperous nation of the world. Accordingly, free education can have a high impact on a nation’s economy.
Due to above mentioned reasons, I firmly believe that university education must be free of charge to cure the society from inequality and unfairness. Moreover, the economic impact will be improved by free academic countries, which can be already seen in real examples like Germany or Norway.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05329949239 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78511390748 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507614213198 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0644927616 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.611111111 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266381122745 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960830698896 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465549969963 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172810303813 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290823796281 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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