do you agree or disagree with the following statement? which of these two options do you believe would give you better about making good travel?
reading about the place online
earning information from a person
That traveling is very important in the life of people undeniable but how we can earn information about we want to go plays a crucial role in our traveling, personally I believe that reading about the place is better. should realize the advantages of online research in having good vacation, we ponder over it much more scrupulously. the finding the best place for our holiday recently been the topic debate among families.
I believe that the place a person wants to go is an important part of traveling, and these are my justification, to begin with, online research gives me a variety of information about the place I want to go. for instance, two years ago I decided to go turkey and I searched on google about beautiful cities in that country and I fined the best rout could arrive at these places. internet helped me I spend little time in traffic, therefore, I had no problem in finding the pretty place., The second reason why I advocate this point of vie liaising the fact that online research helps me know the comment of a lot of people about the place I want to go. in that Travel I read comments of others in the website of Istanbul and I understood most of the people that had gone there they had really good time in that city. hence, online research helped me know different recommendations all around the word. the least but not the last when we use intent to survey about the place. we know about the history of that place and this information more reliable than aperson information that s/he tells us. for example, one of my friends said to me about a place that he liked there and when I saw that place I feel that I wasted my time to come there.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look it from another perspective because a coin has two sides as well, sometimes website exaggerates about the place because the wan to absorb a lot of people in that place so we can use the information of the person that s/he had come there besides online research. in turn, the person can help us to have an enjoyable holiday.
B taking all the above-mentioned arguments into consideration the following conclusion can be drown about the issue, understanding the adentages of online research for deciding where we want to go is not logical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55474452555 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60745075482 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1054141936 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.714285714 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3571428571 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212168090425 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781965487838 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562437975405 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127888779343 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471682961245 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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