Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, there has been a ton of debate on what kind of job is more satisfying for workers. Personally, I am of the opinion that it is better to do similar tasks during workday. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, it is more efficient when different people at different positions deal with specific tasks. Obviously, since everyone has limited energy, a person can do only a great job by putting all his efforts on it, and eventually becomes a professional. With all the professionals working together, the company as a whole can run smoothly without wasting time in going back and forth to adjust the entire process. Therefore, workers are more satisfied. For example, in a large cellphone company there are multiple stations with each being in charge of a specific part of the phone, such as the screen, the processor or the battery. Professionals at each station have to do their best to make sure the part they are responsible for have the best quality. Consequently, the company can sell more products, and workers can earn more money.
Secondly, doing similar tasks helps workers become more confident with what they are doing. Evidently, by repeating the same tasks over and over again, workers can improve their skills and avoid making mistakes, while doing multiple duties can create anxious environment for workers and increase the chance of make errors. This is best demonstrated by my personal experience. I used to work as a assistant for the director of my department, and I was stressed out everyday because of the diverse tasks I had to deal with, making me feel lost about who I am. Now, as a dietitian my only job is to make sure my patient get the best treatment, and I am more confident than ever about my future.
In conclusion, I am fully convinced that worders are more satified when doing repeatitive tasks during workday. This is because workers can benifit more from the improved efficicy of the company and because they become more confident.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom the improved efficicy of the company and because they become more confident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66622258207 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534285714286 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.358307989 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298822265319 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101956015798 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883290721325 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189485179952 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341054494837 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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