Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Opinions divide when it comes to whether workers feel pleased when they have various types of tasks to do, with some claiming that it's more interesting, while some believe that it's painful to learn different skills. From my perspective, I agree with the former argument. There are several reasons in support of the following paragraphs.
First, people tend to have a low mood when they are dedicated to the same task for a long time. If workers are only allowed to do similar tasks five days a week, it's highly possible for them to treat their job as a tedious and boring activity. Therefore, it's barely possible for laborers to feel satisfied with their jobs. Take my own experience, for example, I once took a part-time job in a restaurant. All I have to do is just wash dishes for three hours every day. It was suffering and I eventually quitted the job. For this reason, I don't think that workers will feel pleasant when they are asked to do similar tasks long.
Secondly, executing the same kind of jobs leads to low efficiency. To be more specific, if a person is asked to do similar tasks for a long time, it's easy for him or her to pay less attention to it. That is, he is easily distracted by other activities when he is working. Since he doesn't fully focus on his job, it will take more time to finish it. In the end, the working period must become longer. No one can deny that a long-time working style leads to an unhealthy mental state. Hence, I strongly believe that doing the same kind of tasks will eventually cause workers to feel low satisfied.
Admittedly, it takes time to learn new knowledge to meet different types of tasks and the learning process might be painful. Nevertheless, people need the feeling of accomplishment from their work, and acquiring unfamiliar skills is a suitable challenge for people to conquer. Therefore, I believe that learning and adapting to new tasks are worth the trouble.
To sum up, I don't think that workers will be happier when they only have similar tasks to do. Since it's easy to feel tedious and leads to long working hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61930294906 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49453686518 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525469168901 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2980768356 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3181818182 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335464965377 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965526047769 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978000525674 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20789667145 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920406214745 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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