Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people agree that workers are satisfied when they only need to do similar tasks all day long, while some holds the opposite opinion. In my point of view, I go with the statement that they are more pleased when they are involved with many different types of tasks during the workday. My opinions are as follow.
To start with, I strongly believe that they are more satisfied with this because it's not easy to get exhausted. When one only does similar tasks all day long, there are high chances that they may feel bored by repeating the same process. Take myself as an example. When I am in high school, Monday morning is always the hardest to get through. Since the classes that morning, including Chinese, Sociology, and Geology, all require memorization. I found myself especially bored and tired during that period since I just kept memorizing what the teachers said. While if there were Art class or PE class, things were different since we were asked to make some output, that is drawing and running. Thus, I thinks it also applies to the workers. If they have different types of works to do, it's easier for them to endure.
Secondly, doing so will make them more satisfied since they can learn more and explore more. Even though one can improve himself by keep working on one single thing, getting in tough with multiple skills enables one to broaden one's knowledge. From my Dad's experience, though he used to work as a soldier in the military, he learned a lot of things from it. During that period, he was really prominent and be seen as a trustworthy man by his leaders. He was assigned to different tasks that time. For instance, in the morning he was asked to help out in the kitchen, and in the afternoon he was assigned to check and fix the engine and equipments in the center. Compared to others, he sees his military life more satisfied since he got a lot of things to explore and learn. In short, if workers can engage in different tasks during workday, I believe it will make him feel more content and also knowledgable.
In conclusion, though some may holds different idea in this, I think having many different tasks to do in one day will be the best condition for the workers. It's not only because they will not get bored of it, and also because they can learn more in different fields in the long run. Theses are the two reasons I agree with the statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ore pleased when they are involved with many different types of tasks during the workday. My o...
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...sks during the workday. My opinions are as follow. To start with, I strongly believe t...
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Message: Did you mean 'task'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: task
...t exhausted. When one only does similar tasks all day long, there are high chances th...
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...t, that is drawing and running. Thus, I thinks it also applies to the workers. If they...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... multiple skills enables one to broaden ones knowledge. From my Dads experience, tho...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... different idea in this, I think having many different tasks to do in one day will be the best...
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Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... Its not only because they will not get bored of it, and also because they can learn mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in short, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56511627907 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33529251494 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493023255814 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5224855315 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.347826087 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6956521739 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374113592778 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103398205076 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104831371813 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276803849707 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131333947235 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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