Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reason and example to support your answer.
Nowadays, most people try to get the most lucrative job that helps them to support their families' needs. I definitely agree with the opinion that people should take the opportunity of getting a secure job right away. I will explain the reasons on which my stance is based on the following paragraphs.
To begin with, It is difficult to get a new if you lack the necessary experience, however, you can not get this experience without having a job. To solve this paradox, one should accept the first secure job that is available. While working in your new jobs, you will build your knowledge and experience needed to get a better job in future. Moreover, being involved in work environment will open many areas of skills and training which were not in the reach of your hand. You will be aware of the pros and the cons of the abilities, which you were not aware of them. For instance, I used to work a part-time teacher immediately after my graduation. The salary was very low, but I gained a lot of experience during this time which helped to get a better job.
Furthermore, it is extremely important to have some financial income. You can use this money to get some courses, study online in your free time, or even buy some elegant clothes to wear them during your interviews in the future. This salary or money will also enhance your self-confidence and get rid of any negative feeling. I have read research which indicated that those who are able to take the ladder of jobs of success step by step are likely to be high professional managers in the future.
Admittedly, those who believe that waiting for a dream job is a better approach may have some logic in their stance. However, I do not think that any discreet person would miss a chance to learn and be paid . It is certainly more practical approach to accept the first available job instead of putting your head above the clouds.
In conclusion, based on the aforementioned reason, I do believe that taking the first available job is a smart and a successful choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6408839779 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58455650079 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1868818221 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3477919766 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106378150712 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833643168517 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19102955324 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708224809758 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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