Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.

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decision making is a crucial part in anyones lif...
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...ul decisions.but are youngsters nowadays more able to take their own decisions th...
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...ir own decisions than their past peers? i strongly believe that young people at t...
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...me are less dependable on their parents.i feel this way for two reason ,which i w...
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...r parents.i feel this way for two reason ,which i will explore in the following es...
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...ce in children away from their parents. i mean it is the age of computers and com...
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...s worldwide.this technological lifestyle,provides a huge amount of information to childre...
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...and eases their access to it.for example,most of children nowadays knows how to use t...
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...nd eases their access to it.for example,most of children nowadays knows how to use tablets,they ...
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...ildren nowadays knows how to use tablets,they can order books and toys by themselves ...
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...supervision of their parents.duo to this,they become more confident and curious to so...
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... alone and so more dependent.for example,my niece orders her toys herself by using...
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...ent.for example,my niece orders her toys herself by using the internet and she do...
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... herself by using the internet and she do not find any difficulty in this.she is ...
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...eliance than their peers did years ago. moreover,the modernization of school sys...
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... lot to create more independent students,the sophisticated programs nowadays tend to...
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...ctivities rather than just listening to the he teacher,for example,they can make a pre...
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...sing a new strong independent generation ,that is almost completely dependent from...
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...pletely dependent from their parents. in conclusion,though some may reject my re...
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...dent from their parents. in conclusion,though some may reject my reasons,but i truly ...
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...lusion,though some may reject my reasons,but i truly believe that we encounter a gen...
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...s more freely than it was many years ago,not only because of the new technological a...
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...students to be involved in every aspect.i think parents should give their childre...
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...he liberty in taking their own decisions,this will definitely help them in gaining mo...
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...re sense of responsibility at early ages .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i feel, i mean, i think, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43909348442 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32642202208 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620396600567 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.511445467 48.9658058833 424% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.0 100.406767564 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.8333333333 20.6045352989 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 5.45110844103 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.5376344086 614% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239343470756 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127022633897 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511678825781 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150890214236 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857026466632 0.0645574589148 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 11.7677419355 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 58.1214874552 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.01818996416 135% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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