Making decisions in different aspects of life is unavoidable for all people. In the past a young person depended on her/his parents more than today for considering various factors and drawing a conclusion. Using older people’s experience might was the only available reference before. In addition, the culture and overall opinion in societies induce young people be more independent.
For a young person deciding about important subjects might be difficult. Everybody needs to consider different aspects of a subject before making a decision about that. Nowadays there are lots of books, websites, coaching and counseling services which could ease and comfort the process of choosing a specific thing. Young people access to a huge source of knowledge that were not achievable for previous generations. For instance, I can use internet to choose what I should prepare for my kid’s birthday party very easily. But in the past especially before the advent of the internet and modern technologies the most available information was older people’s experience and suggestions. So, a young person consulted with her/his parents more than today.
In my point of view, societies overall attitude and culture has changed dramatically. Today there are lot of phycological concepts, subjects and discussions about how parents could raise their kids as a stronger and wiser person. They encourage parents to trust their kids and to let their children to make mistakes and learn from that mistakes themselves. So, parents care more about growing up their children with great decision-making abilities. They tend to have more independent kids. Thus, they let their young children and teenagers make decision by their own. In contrast, in the past parents didn’t trust their children’s skills and tried to push them toward what they thought were right or better for them.
To sum up, today young people do better job in making decisions independently than they did in the past. For a young person using reachable professional consulting services and online information is an important alternative that they apply instead of asking parents to give some advice for making a decision. The opinion of parents also changed somehow that they persuade their young children decide about their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40443213296 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84392440418 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542936288089 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7568302601 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9047619048 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405281848656 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124262461223 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835161462548 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267107012399 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451943908874 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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