Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to relax by watching movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
These days, in order to make headways and progress in this sophisticated world, most people spend too much time working, studying and so on. Without any doubt, this kind of living can lead to a hectic life; therefore, after doing stressful jobs and studying with a lot of pressure, they need something to refresh their mind and make their body relax. To accomplish this, there are various ways, and choosing the desirable mood depends on each person’s lifestyle. Thus, a controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea is about the best ways to achieve this goal. Some people may hold the view that watching movies and reading books can help them relax; however, some others may take a different perspective and believe that physical activities and exercises are better options for achieving this purpose. I am personally, in agreement with the latter opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding rationales to justify my point of view.
The first remarkable reason to be mentioned is that researches have proved that when people exercise, their body releases chemicals called endorphins. These hormones interact with the receptors in their brain that reduce their perception of pain; as a result, they can trigger and spark a positive feeling in the body and make it relax. As a matter of fact, doing physical activities not only will help them improve their physical strength, but also could be helpful for their mental alleviation. To shed light on this reason, I would like to draw your attention to my personal experience. Two years ago, I used to exercise regularly, and whenever I went to the gym, I became much more relaxed and energized, but unfortunately now, I quit doing physical activities because of my busy life and I have much higher stresses than two years ago. If I continued doing daily exercises, I would be able to manage my frantic life in a more relaxed mood.
The second pivotal reason that is worth being taken into account meticulously is about that exercising requires passive attention instead of active attention. In fact, I do believe that when people try to read a book, they have to focus on whatever has been written in that book carefully, otherwise, they cannot grasp the details. For an instance, when I jog alongside a lake near where I live with closed eyes, I get really calm with an easy mind and I could be able to think about nothing. Thus, people could gain tranquil time by doing physical activities just like a low-hanging fruit.
To make a long story short, this is my deep belief that if people want to relieve tensions of their life in their leisure time, nothing better than dynamic life can set the path toward it. Additionally, if one weighs the merits and demerits of this statement, one soon realizes that doing regular exercises is much better than reading a book or watching a movie to unwind and make somebody feel at ease. All the aforementioned reasons point to my vantage point; consequently, it is highly recommended that one not underestimate the effects of exercising in his life in order to become more relaxed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...ing a movie to unwind and make somebody feel at ease. All the aforementioned reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, in fact, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2607.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89118198874 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66598120063 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55722326454 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 818.1 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1967772423 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.35 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.65 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215314910627 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599507167729 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507779670756 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13084995178 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00675888677511 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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