Computer games are growing too fast. Many of the children all over the world are the big fan of them because they found it very attractive. Among which a widely discussed one is that too much time has been wasted on computer games. Therefore, I believe that children should be banned from playing computer games.
To commence with, children are growing up until puberty physically and mentally. Thus it is very important in this age what is surrounding with, real-world or virtual one. Some games take the children away from reality. They illustrate some fancy character for children and after a while, these characters may penetrate in their minds. If the games are rough, it may affect children behavior and make them aggressive. In some cases, games ask children to do some dangerous activities such as blue whale challenge which encouraged kids to jump from the height.
In addition, when children play computer games, time passes and they hardly understand. They become addicted to playing for hours and hours. They might have difficulty in concentrating their studies and classes or lake of time for doing homework.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Computer games are growing too fast. Man...
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... banned from playing computer games. To commence with, children are growing u...
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... until puberty physically and mentally. Thus it is very important in this age what i...
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...uraged kids to jump from the height. In addition, when children play computer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 407.700716846 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08602150538 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53779387142 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4418158007 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7692307692 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245702825464 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901435592717 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544121073077 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166694368223 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402797445736 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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