I do not agree that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Teachers still value a lot in our modern society, and they are not only related to academic, but also related to art and sport and many other different areas. In every specific area, if someone wants to become expertise, having help from a teacher is the most effective way.
In the academic area, a teacher can be a professor in a university. Worldwise famous universities always have a lot of excellent professors, and these professors usually have a high salary. The faculty is the main factor when a student considers enrolling a specific university because the student can have a bright future with a good professor. For example, I enroll in my college mainly because my profession is doing a great job in Computer Science. I learned a lot of stuff from him, and I really appreciated his work.
In the sports area, a teacher can be a coach. Nowadays, there are many famous worldwide sports games all around the world, and these games become more and more competitive. In order to win these games, athletes need an experienced coach. Take the US national female volleyball team as an example, it used to in a low rank in the world, but after the team managers hired the famous former Chinese national volleyball player Lang Pin as the coach of the team. This team has a significant improvement in its performance. It is now in the first 8 ranks of the world.
In the art area, teachers also play a significant role in the career success of a musician. That is why many Chinese music students go to the US to study music there. For instance, the famous Chinese piano artist LangLang went to the US to study piano at his teenage and his teachers there are famous piano artists. LangLang mentioned several times in his interview that he really appreciated the help of his teachers.
In summary, nowadays, we are in a more and more competitive world, in order to be more successful, we have to need to make ourself more potent. The more effective way to do this is to get help from experient teachers. Therefore teachers are appreciated and valued in our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... really appreciated his work. In the sports area, a teacher can be a coach. Nowaday...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re in a more and more competitive world, in order to be more successful, we have ...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...is to get help from experient teachers. Therefore teachers are appreciated and valued in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67792207792 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66730610201 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496103896104 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8226688354 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7619047619 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227920026956 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688877469532 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116050689603 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133303120111 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10493166938 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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