do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
the automobile is destroying the quality of our life.
use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When you are asked about the effects of automobile in our life, a lot of advantages and disadvantages of automobile will make your mind busy. So that’s the real that for %100 sure we can’t say everything is good or bad. However, always there are more negative or positive points that carry more weight. In my view, disadvantages of automobile in our life is more. I take this position on account of following reasons.
First, the Ozone layer is a horrible problem that we are facing with. Using a lot of private automobiles let the greenhouse gases to release and make a lot of dangers for Ozone layer. Although we can use public transportation for going to where ever that we want go and don’t use our cars for our transportations. Moreover the continuation of our lives in the Earth depends on the Ozone layer.
A further point we must consider is that the most important reason that we use our private automobiles is buying more time for our life. Doing our works faster and going to everywhere sooner and not waiting for public transportations. Nevertheless, I think using our automobiles is just wasting our time because nowadays there are a lot of cars and this causes more traffics and the time that we spend in traffic is such as wasting time. Traffics cause making mind busy and getting tired the drivers. This tiredness may transport to others family members and at the make a lot of depressions.
Another point that I have in my mind is the fuel that the automobiles use. The source of this fuel is not just for automobiles and it has a lot of usages, for example in warming the houses or factories. We need this fuel for continuing our life a lot but it is finishing because we use and waste it a lot. In addition, making and obtaining this fuel is not easy and it has a lot of preparation levels and needs a lot of expensive facilities so it costs more money.
Finally, the effects of using automobiles in our health is another important point that we should pay attention to it more than others. Except the effects of greenhouse gases that make dangerous for our breathing, the problem of being lazy and overweigh is another issue. Using cars doesn’t let us to walk, run and do some sports that our bodies need it so it causes overweight and more diseases.
To sum up, for the reasons were stated above the automobile is destroying our quality of life. Of course, as an English proverb goes” a coin has two sides”; therefore, we can’t deny the positive points of automobile but such as I said above the negative points and disadvantages carry more weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, of course, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69197396963 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7891273239 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451193058568 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9092998509 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0434782609 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176510131381 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629130531353 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636074290146 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104074618016 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343218911257 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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