Without any shadow of doubt, the youngster plays a substantial role in our communities. Advancement in technology gives more comfort and luxurious life to the human being. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea is that youngster is given time for helping their community or not. Some people penchant that youngster help to their society. While, other people believe that adults are not helping to their community. From my vantage point, I certainly concur that adults have not adequate time to helping their communities. To support my stances, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoints.
To begin with, surging the human population causes stiff competitions in the every field. A person more engages in seeking the jobs, competition causes hard to find a good job with satisfied salary. Youngsters leave their communities and migrate to another area causes they have not the time to aid their community. For instance, hard to make money and hectic schedule of the work, people have no time for assist to their community. Moreover, engrossing technology and invention youngsters spend most of the time with new gadgets. Playing a video game, internet surfing and mobile game cause people live life solitary. Now a day, young people do not give the priority to help the community that had in the past.
Furthermore, in the present era, people aware the value of the educations. Most of the youngsters want to study at the high level for successful life. Youth gives their most of attention to their study, in current time; many students’ live in the different place to away from the home for education. In addition, young people has less connect to their communities because of narrow field college gives fewer choices for students. Student has education workload, therefore, they not give attention to the community.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realized that technology and modernization influence on the youngster. Young people interest to make the better life and engage the seek a good job, get the better educations and touch with technology, that reasons, I would subscribe the fact that young people have not time to help to their communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82351239102 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0327463631 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220143661491 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672182766714 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517667561888 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139939691751 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196510321471 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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