Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree with this statement. today, young people are very busy with many purpose that they have or they think that they can not help their communities. some young people may think, that is not their duty, helping other people, I think some times they are right. today's life is not like past, because there is government or united nations and many community for some problems, this cases does not exist in the past so people was helping to each other but I believe, life in the past was so easier than today. in the present time however there is law or committee or government organization but some people are living difficulty while in that past times, many of people had a simple life and they were happy. they were helping to each other for example helping in gathering crops at farm or like that. today's lives are very complicated and people because of being busy with their work and their problems can not think about other people and this work (helping people) is government duty. but in some work, young people such as students help other students in their work such as class projects. in some country, young people have to work hard for their life or for getting money that will create their future so they have not any time for thinking or helping about other one. in other hand some young people do not concern about their future because their government will help them for getting job or even family, I think this people can help their communities but not so much. I think, we can help each other to being happy by giving cost to each other but helping communities is not exactly our job. we have hope for best future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ing communities is not exactly our job. we have hope for best future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52542372881 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06806333373 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427118644068 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3037241579 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213816424048 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103984085788 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571207905699 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213816424048 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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