do you agree or disagree? it is better to relax by reading a book or watching TV than doing exercise.
The question is whether people should relax through watching TV or reading book and or doing exercises. Everyone in consideration to his private view point and interests can maintain a specific direction toward this statement. Some believe reading a new published book or watching an exciting program on TV is able to alleviate the pressures of their life while others have a conviction that doing physical activities such as different types of sports or games would be much effective. I am unanimous with the latter group, so the next paragraphs will vastly elucidate my vantage point through two salient reasons:
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that exercise plays a crucial role in our life. During recent years, a plentiful of researches has been done by scientists to discover the actual merits of doing sport. Tanks to these findings, now we know that exercise helps human beings in several ways such as loosing extra weight, improving the heart and brain's performance and boosting body's power and list goes on. To elucidate, take a person who prefers to swim after working. Not only receives peace this person from the blue color of water, but also his body can resist in cope with a variety of diseases. Meanwhile, one should not forget that doing physical activities like jumping, running and riding and so on, can increase secreted Endorphin in brain which it is responsible for happiness and better concentration.
The second reason for my argument lies the reality that the main goal of relaxing is that people can refresh their body and mind; hence, sedentary activities such as reading or watching may give them the sensation of lethargy or numb feeling. For eliminating of anxiety or stress, living beings should go the gyms, pools and or even the parks to do simple activities. Through this approach, perhaps humans can gain the sense of relaxing through getting familiar with people who share the same interest with them and as a result the new friendships will be made. I remember, when I made a decision to join a soccer team, I could promote my personality because it was a great opportunity to release my negative thoughts by the helps of other members.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that I strongly disagree with this issue and I believe that doing sport activities will cause people to keep their body in a fitness mood, remove their stress and making new friends for themselves.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, second, so, while, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92961165049 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57438471107 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1033339299 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.071428571 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183801991138 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677926831963 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095370342017 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112430956464 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664658331268 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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