Nowadays, several aged people choose to travel abroad to different countries. While some people decide to go to different countries when they are young, some go on trips when they are old. It is so controvertible that people make decisions to travel abroad to different countries as they are young or old. In my view, people should go abroad to various countries when they are young. They can have strong energy for going everywhere, hold enough time to travel there, and exploit these experiences for their future careers.
To begin with, young people definitely have significant strong energy for their travel compared with old people. People who are already old often are not able to all their trips because their legs cannot be durable to these travels. Moreover, they have to give up the beautiful places such as plateau, dessert, and sea and so on. However, it is so enough for young people to keep traveling everywhere they want and see beautiful places.
Secondly, young people have plenty of time to go to different countries. Although it is limited for old people to spend their time on the travel of several counties by their family and work, young people decide their trips as soon as they come up with the ideas. Take my self as an example, I had enough time to travel study abroad myself when I was final year at my university, Therefore, I decide to travel to all Asian countries from January to December before I get my job.
Finally, there are some experiences for the prospective future career of young people on trips to different countries. These countries expand the viewpoint of young people as much as possible. For example, one of young people keeps traveling abroad to almost all countries. One day, he was so impressed by the service of a coffee shop by Japanese people when he traveled to Japan. Thus, he made the choice to work in Japan, also wanted to exploit the type of services created by Japanese in his home town.
To sum up, it is better to travel abroad in different countries when people are young than when people are old. I surely believe that young people hold benefits such as strong physical for enjoyable all trips, splendid of time, and great experiences for their future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77461139896 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4333155828 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455958549223 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8886923497 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142715297551 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663812594581 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738427778537 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105742467482 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576819572691 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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