Do you agree or disagree? Parents today are more involved in their children education than were parents in the past
In this age, education of children is important issue in the society. Fathers and mothers have crucial rule to improve lessons of children. At this present time, critics believe that caregivers are more complicated in the offspring instruction than were fathers and mothers in the previous generation. According what I generally believe, guardians elaborate and inspect their children learning more than past. The following paragraphs by containing the main reasons, will substantiate my viewpoint.
The main reasons why I believe parents supervision education of children is because have excellent grade in school is essential for entering to college and university. To elaborate on my point, in this days because of high competition among students for entering to the collage, parents tend to check up children lessons so that they can go to university which high rank of scientific. In other word, owing to studding in the best collage, children would find outstanding career; hence, it will achieve triumph not only for children but also for guardians. Conversely, in the past parents had many children, so they could not check lesson each children and it did not far important go to college. As result, offspring had another choice such as agriculture, farming, animal husbandry and many other similar items and containers.
In addition, I believe that fathers and mother having high sensitive about method of growing their children like instruction, food and playing; therefore, it is originating from having single child. In other world, since parents have a child, they spend most of time and energy for improving kid. Actually, a juvenile is like asset for them; for this reasons, parents who have only one child have tending pay attention to him or her. In contrast, in the past people have many children; then, parents had less responsibility for their children. As soon as growing up, the children had to work hard, girls in the house and boys in the farmland. The difficult condition of the life did not allow parents to put enough time for the children.
To conclude, I think the role of parents in the education of children are more potent in comparison with the past. It is because they want children have better life in the future, and they have only one or two children; therefore, children success' as the same as parents' success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, hence, if, so, then, therefore, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09819121447 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71016443903 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524547803618 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6533311993 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.611111111 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277065527556 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103511083985 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765075412669 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192080376564 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334273422271 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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