Do you agree or disagree :people benefit more from traveling in their own country than in foreign countries
With economic prosperity and convenient transportation, more and more people choose to travel during their breaks or holidays. Under this circumstance, choosing the destination of travel becomes a common question for people planning to travel. Someone may assert that traveling in his or her own country benefits them more because they harbor the idea that traveling within the border of their homeland, they are capable of taking a close encounter with their own cultures and traditions. However, in my opinion, outbound tourism is my preferred option and there are several reasons accounting for my perspective.
Firstly, the outbound traveling is conducive to visitors owing to its significant effects on widening horizons and expanding knowledge. For instance, traveling to France, we can familiarize ourselves with romantic literature, while visiting Switzerland, we are rendered an opportunity to embrace the aspiration of sustainable development and global cooperation.Those things that we have learned from our traveling can be incorporated to ourselves, not only as the accumulation of knowledge but also as a determining factor in our significant decision. Here is a case in the point. Before my trip to Switzerland, I have never seen various international organizations aiming at global cooperation and advancement. However, after paying a visit to Geneva, I was guided to ponder about another possibility of my career goal, which is delving into international public law. This experience verifies that traveling to foreign countries can augment the chances of coming up with sparkling ideas.
Furthermore, traveling abroad is also conducive to travelers due to travel’s effects on mental health. Currently, people from all walks of life are suffering from excessive pressure, which triggers various mood fluctuations, even despair. Under this situation, the outbound trip does the trick in mitigating mental problems. To be more specific, it has been reported that more than seventy percent of legal practitioners opt for having visits to overseas sight spots, like the Taj Mahal, the Peace Palace and so on. When being asked for their consideration, they usually reckon that traveling to an unfamiliar and exotic place makes them forget all annoying and trivial affairs that they have encountered in their lives and immerses them in the beauty. On the contrary, traveling within the border fails to achieve this goal, because they still meet people with similar language, similar preferences for food, and similar traditions and nothing is inspiring for them to boost their moods.
Admittedly, some individuals contend that traveling in their home country is more cost-effective and helps them memorize the history of their country, which is of great benefit to them. However, traveling abroad in other countries can actually grant them the opportunity to interact with individuals from a completely different country, thus generating sparkling ideas. Besides, outbound tourism also plays an important role in recharging our batteries, which indicates that it is worthy of investment.
In a nutshell, traveling in foreign countries is my preferred choice due to its significant effects on enlarging knowledge and psychological health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2816.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96610169492 4.8611393121 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46787282253 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58686440678 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.758983 48.9658058833 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.647058824 100.406767564 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7647058824 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289807020748 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938018601098 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739969896693 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170961236399 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585499680318 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 11.7677419355 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 10.9000537634 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 86.8835125448 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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