do you agree or disagree? the rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict .
The question is whether the rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict or not. Everyone with regard to his private viewpoint can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however I am inclined to refute it. In my perspective expect some countries in third world, other rest countries do not set young generation under pressure of the strict rules. My arguments and reasons are listed below which will strengthen my vantage point:
To begin with, it is axiomatic that the world is changing and the societies are looking for more facilities for their dwellers. Unlike the past, nowadays people can migrate easily if they are not satisfied with condition of their life. There is a famous phenomenon in the communities that is called" brains escape". Today's if the young people feel any severity from the government, immediately they leave the country; hence the governments try to avoid from any strict rule because the prosperity of every society depends on its youth. For instance, in the past the religious rules was requiring young people not to wear sport clothes or not to participate in the parties; however these rules have been obsolete now.
The second reason why I deny this issue lies in the fact the psychology science has progressed and psychologists strongly highlight that the communities have to create comfort beds for the young cortex. Such advertises in protection of young people continuously have been repeated in different media; so the governments should not forget that any hard rule can provide the dissatisfied beds in the society.
Moreover, nowadays the families are educated more than the past and they have enough time to study the books related with how to behave with their young children. Inasmuch there are few children in every house; consequently the parents prefer a calm and free condition for their youth. Take the marriage issue; in the past when the young people were finishing the university and finding work, they were forced to depart the house; however today's one of the reasons of increasing of the age of marriage is the excessive freedom in the families.
By taking all above mentioned arguments this conclusion could be drawn that due to the current condition in the societies, the young people confront with less strict rules compared with the past because if the countries are willing to compete with other countries in the world, they must create a satisfied circumstance for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of increasing of the age of marriage is the excessive freedom in the families. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, third, well, for instance, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09927360775 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62329197654 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53995157385 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.873577397 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.428571429 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265403959724 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10027297118 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151599201163 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142186291328 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937049459286 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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