Do you agree or disagree with the statement that people who learn many different skills are more successful than those who focus on only one skill.
Undoubtedly, this world is advances with an accelerating pace in diverse areas in the highest level of specializing. Engine of this rapid movement is advanced skills and abilities which people earned in their jobs. While some people believe that having various abilities in differents field is neccessary to succeed, others, like me, disagree. I will ealborate in my points of view in the following parageraphs.
First, concentrating on a specific skill help us to improve our speciality at the highest level. Some thing that nowadays is vital to do our job is expertise in our field. Because of the sophisticated technologies and advanced methodes that we are using in our daily works in all walks of life, we need highly adriot individuals who are able to the tasks at the right time and in the right place. To put this into perspective, I remember that my father who worked as in an engineering job in a food producing company for two decades, he was a jake of all trades and did his work very well until the recent years that their factory up graded its aparatuses and the new instrument were all controled with computers and need a high level skills. After that new up-grade my father felt he is master of none. This example clearly delineate the specialized world that has infleunced all aspects of our life and underscores the importance of being skillful on one skill.
Second, master and skillful people have a confidence which help them to ran their job efficiently. These kinds of folks now how they can do the work to get the best results, and actually they are able to find the solutions when they encounter a dilemma in the current task. Because to be master in a field, we need to be familiar with the authenticat resources and get used to use them whenever we need. For example, in the pharmacy where I work, there are some pharmacist with different speciality in multitude majors such as; infection diseases, cardiovascolar, nephrology and so on. This is a routine appraoch that they ask each other when they find a question in other pharmacists majors. They used the up to date refrences in that specific area to find the suitable answer. It showed me that every thing is so broad which needs more specialized and skillful people are a real gemstone in work environment due to help that they provide the team.
Considering all the reasons and details, I firmly believe that being specialist in a task ix much better than knowing a little about many issues. This is because that every thing in this advanced world is sophisticated and need a lot of knowledge and because skillful poeple can handle their job at the best level and they run their job with confidence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73931623932 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71313340038 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529914529915 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6289597889 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.736842105 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6315789474 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150398501073 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457565896086 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366285715573 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899507427579 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111967066692 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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