Do you agree or disagree with the statement:
up-to-date skills for worker are important, so the government should pay for the training courses for all adults who over 25 age to let them get new skills.
The specific working ability for every employee is of great importance for a company’s overall economy and development. How to enhance this kind of ability is a hot topic. As far as I am concerned, offering the training classes to workers by the help of local government is a reasonable plan.
To start with, such advanced courses can contribute to a company’s value. To be more specific, attending all kinds of practical classes, workers from divergent fields can gain more useful knowledge and cultivate creativity. With creativity, the majority of them can think out of the box and solve the problems in unique ways, which can make more value for a company and even a country. For example, my father works as a computer analyst in Huawai, one of the most famous IT companies in the world. Fortunately, the Chinese government invents 10 million RMB for training employees about new technologies. The courses here include deep understanding of smart phones and are taught by college professors. As a result, the workers in Huawai explore a new way of communication technology called 5G and earn millions of orders from the market. Therefore, it is the high-level courses that help Huawai earn much more money.
Furthermore, the employees themselves can find a decent job by taking part in those courses.
In such developed classes, it is crucial for adults to study efficient and practical skills, such as Excel, Python and communicating tips, which pave the way for them to have a bright career. For example, my friend Tom, he took part in a course focusing on data analytics. By continually practicing all kinds of data cleaning, visualizing and reporting, he acquired a strong quantitative background on marking, finance and accounting. Last year, without doubt, he got a job in a top consulting company with a decent salary and high reputation. Therefore, with the help of practical courses, Tom improves his living standard and leads a happy life.
Admittedly, submitting some training courses may be responsible for government’s financial burden. Since the population of all adults over 25 is a large amount, the local government has to fund much money on teachers, organizations and sites. However, if those adults can really uptake the advanced skills and put them into practices, the drawbacks of such policy are outweighed by those of merits.
In a nutshell, there are very reasons to believe that holding professional courses for workers is a significant action.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1941031941 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03964670554 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577395577396 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3242844861 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280869303216 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752459503653 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554422965113 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134111712173 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629348857103 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.