Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them? Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer.
Although some people adamantly claim that people learn more from the books or by surfing on the Internet, others hold an opposite point of view toward this controversial issue. Personally, I am of the belief that the friends who live near us have an undeiable influence on our lives. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, even though individuals usually have an opposite view toward other people’s opinion since they thought that others are biased in some extent, they admit their friends’ ideas easily without any resistance. For example, I can remember, when I was a highschool student, I often opposed my mom’s critics which were mostly about my behaviors in feasts or my strange clothes. I did this since I thought she was limiting me unfairly. One day, when the high school invited all of my classmates to participate in a formal session, my close friend notified me about how eccentric my clothes are. She suggest me to wear a formal clothes in the session not to look so rude. I accept her idea as we were friends for several years and had a warm relationship. This experience recalls me that close friend have a progound influence on the people specifically youngsters.
Second, in most cases, people make frined with their peers who have similar interests. When you spend most of your time with your friends, they could have a comprehensive understanding of your personality. These friends know you and your difficulties better since they are in a similar state. Conversely, most of the parents or teachers are older and couldn’t have a complete understanding. For instance, as I mentioned in the previous paragraph, my friend was cautious about my behavior as she liked me so much and she don’t want to see me in an embarrasing situation. This was because she had experienced this feeling before and could underestand how bad this sense is for a young person.
All in all, our close friends have a profound effect on our lives. Since not only we admit their opinion easily, but also they are in the same ages and similar conditions so they could perceive the situation comprehensively. I would suggest my children to find friends who are so cautious about their behaviors since they will affect on my kids’ temprament.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 620, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
...about how eccentric my clothes are. She suggest me to wear a formal clothes in the sess...
Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
...s about their behaviors since they will affect on my kids' temprament.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90076335878 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85857450144 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7570363025 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.368421053 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114302287712 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397047832332 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447681520531 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738186994836 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026926703451 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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