Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents` generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
When it comes to the issue the generational differences, it is quite normal that people have various opinions about t, because every generation lives in a different word. As far as I am concerned, my parents have simple life because of the lack of technology, and made horrible experience because of the war.
First and the most important difference is that my parents did not possess many technologies in the past. At that time, technology was not so advanced and people had a simple life. In contrast, with the advent of computer and Internet over past few decades, our world has become inundate with machines and digital devices, which makes people’s life more comfortable. I think that a small example give some light on this matter. Some decades ago, my father had not television, because it was a luxury and most people could nod afforded to buy it. Moreover, television programs were so poor that it could not keep people busy. Nevertheless, the advent modern technologies change the scenario, and now we now can not live without them. In fact, not only we have access plenty of channels of television, but also we can make personal channel in several websites like YouTube. Furthermore, the social network applications like Facebook, Google Plus, and Twitter are integral parts of modern life.
In the second places, anther difference between our generations is a war, which lasted for eight years. As we all know, the war has numerous negative effects on people, it causes injury, illness, even death, homelessness and job loss, and it destroys infrastructures like roads, transportation, communications, and water and electric system. I think that there is not a better instance than a real story. My father always has told about his little brother, who died during the war because of the lack of drug. In deed, the war condition did not allow hospital to provide sufficient medicine for patients, so majority of people died because of a simple disease. However, we are living in reconciliation-rich environment, so that people pay more attention on their health, which increases the population. In addition, the government is able to focus more on economic and increase people’s welfare by providing more facilities.
In conclusion, we must be aware of this point that differences between generations always have existed, and it is quite normal. The only thing we must consider is that we learn from differences and move in the right direction. Last but not least, I hope that people gain the deeper insight that various opinions are not adverse.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'as to', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'in the second place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243407707911 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.127789046653 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101419878296 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0628803245436 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0588235294118 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127789046653 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0141987829615 0.0351676179071 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91142600526 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00811359026369 0.0309702414327 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0709939148073 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121703853955 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141987829615 0.0139019557991 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2581.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 425.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07294117647 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362352941176 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268235294118 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192941176471 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112941176471 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91142600526 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574117647059 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 68.9872136361 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2380952381 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1506826773 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.904761905 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 47.0616246499 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.54471544715 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177418266139 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906220161052 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749572729944 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441042207904 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133474092043 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636781479163 0.114077575197 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423012673247 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355476740236 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.050144099267 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128240496988 0.210909579961 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269799225804 0.0618886996521 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.