The father and mother
The father and mother are the most effective object in the life of their child or children. They can influence on them that anyone else cannot. In my opinion, a couple of things that they should bear, the first being friend with their children and the second is disciplinarian. If parents being friend with their children, the children always feel that have a strong supporter, for example, if children have some problems, they will ask their parents to solve them. In addition, the disciplinarian of parents helps children to find their ways in life. Sometimes, the children lose the right way that in this situation, their parents must lead them to discover the correct and also, sometimes they do the good items so, their parents must encourage them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 1977.66487455 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 128.0 407.700716846 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 4.48103885553 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49447631967 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 212.727598566 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 618.680645161 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6432876837 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.45110844103 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0657772045474 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592461296591 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132478373322 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657772045474 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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