Have you ever wondered what causes that people live longer nowadays than before? There can be different explanations about this phenomenon. In this essay, I will discuss how technology, physical exercise and advances in medicine make people live longer.
To begin with, technology has improved the length of people’s lives. Since people have access to internet on their cellphones, they can easily be informed about the kind of food they can consume and avoid. For instance, my sixty-year-old mom likes to watch videos on YouTube and reads blogs in order to know the fruits and vegetables that are good for her health. In addition to this, people get informed on the amount of food they should consume, and they do not even have to visit the nutritionist. As an example, my mother also makes a food pyramid based on the information she found online, and it really paid off.
Another reason is physical exercise. In the past, most people did not know how important regular workout was for her health. For example, in Iran there was a problem of obesity in the 20th century, but things have changed, the obesity problem has reduced. Moreover, more gyms and spaces where people can work out are being built nearby. For instance, a new gym was open two years ago right next to our neighborhood, and my father was able to join it, so he is now in a good shape.
One last reason is the advances in medicine that help people cure and prevent severe diseases. More and more treatments and medications for serious diseases have been released in this century. A friend of mine suffered from breast cancer lately; however, she found an advanced and cheap treatment in a hospital that helped her get rid of it.
In conclusion, in this essay I have described how technology, exercise and advances in medicine improve people’s lifetime. But on the other hand, not exactly of progress of technology help people, its depends on lots aspects. Also, not always working.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8869047619 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58773900164 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4424184364 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4210526316 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176138293299 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561324304294 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065121132405 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110577019245 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101994017983 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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