How has technology made our lives better?
Technology a familiar term which includes a great variety of concepts, and after industrial revolution is growing in a rapid and, fascinating pace which obviously has had many impacts on the quality of the modern humans' life.
First, cellphones; they are very important in my life because I can connect to the international internet network, and I can access to newly researched areas and articles and , in the other hand I can download most of the published books in the world in any language and it doesn’t matter it is recently published or not , I can download it by only a few clicks but the most important advantage of new cellphone is , they provide easy communication tools which they were just dreams a couple of years ago.
Second, vehicles, inseparable part of our lives, fast convenient and efficient machineries and not only the transport ourselves but also our merchants and goods. No matter what we want and where we are the can bring it to us in few hours or only minutes. So, one of the most beneficial part of technology progression is its vehicle parts.
Third, mechanizing different areas of society such as: health organizations, entertainment industries , music and, etc.for example inventing new machines which the can take blood and analyzing it just in a minute ; or automatic tools in the field of cancer treatment or recently photographing methods are just a few of many achievements.
In conclusion due to aforementioned reason I think technology by providing cellphones and broad access to internet, new efficient vehicles and, mechanizing has had huge influence on our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06390977444 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0446941461 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.823335097 48.9658058833 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.428571429 100.406767564 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.6045352989 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.45110844103 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770415272052 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045362951619 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437564957348 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484880234897 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449648672751 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 11.7677419355 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 10.002688172 275% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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