I agree with the statement that life today is more easier and comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following eassy.
I agree with the statement that life today is easier and comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, transportation became far better than what it was around seventy years ago. Having good transportation always make life easier like we can go anytime, anywhere we want, which was not that easy around seven decades ago. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About ten days ago, I was sitting with my grandfather, and he is telling me a story about his childhood incident. He said, his friend, who lives in the nearby town, got seriously sick one day and someone told him about that. He eagerly wants to go to see him but he can't because he does not have his own vehicle and bus will start the next morning. Similarly, my friend got injured in a car accident, he told me to come, and I immediately picked up the keys to my car and went there. Since I have my car, I don't need to wait for anybody or public transport. I can easily go there and help him with whatever he required. As a result, life becomes easier for me also and for my friend also.
Second, the presence of high-speed internet which was invented a few years back. Internet solves a lot many problems for us, knowingly or unknowingly, starting from morning till night. Helping from finding a location on the map, meaning of words, reading online books, online shopping, etc. These are just a few use cases which become part of our daily lives. In contrast, during the time of our grandparent's childhood, they don't have any internet. For books, they have to go to the library and sometimes books are not even available. For shopping, they need to go to the market, but unfortunately, it was closed sometimes, so they need to go again. Therefore, life was difficult at that time. For instance, during my college time, I was in serious need of money for tuition fees, so I reached to my friend, who lived in another city and told him about the problem. He immediately transferred me the amount via net-banking, which is possible only through the internet. As a result, life has become very comfortable and easier.
In sum, though some may oppose the statement, I think life has become very smooth and relax. Not only because of better transportation but also because of high-speed internet. I think it will even become smoother in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e eagerly wants to go to see him but he cant because he does not have his own vehicl...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...e eagerly wants to go to see him but he cant because he does not have his own vehicl...
^^^^
Line 3, column 797, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and went there. Since I have my car, I dont need to wait for anybody or public tran...
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Line 3, column 973, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es easier for me also and for my friend also. Second, the presence of high-speed i...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ime of our grandparents childhood, they dont have any internet. For books, they have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62442396313 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62671295169 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541474654378 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0117580508 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1923076923 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294500375833 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853824353891 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134323465217 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29698298228 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.34414886806 0.0645574589148 533% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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