Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reasons and examples to support your an

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

First, sports activities improve an individual’s health. Since good health is the foundation of almost everything in our lives, from academic to career development. The fit body improves efficiency, keeps you enthusiastic and make you voracious towards work. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About 4 years ago, when I was in my first year of college, I usually got sick when there is a change in weather due to my weak immune system, but after starting exercise I saw good results. My immune system improves a lot and after that, I never missed a class because of poor health. As a result, I got good grades. I think colleges should give equal financial support to sports.

Second, social activities develop skills which you cannot develop by reading books like coöperation, teamwork, confidence, communication to name a few. These skills are not naturally present in a child, they need to be developed from their childhood. For instance, in my last school, about 8 years ago, we used to have social activities every Friday for 2 hours. There we used to play games which will teach you how to develop coöperation, teamwork skills. We generally play games which cannot be completed individually, you need to take help from others to complete, teaches teamwork and coöperation. Sometimes we used to have debate or extempore competition with near-by school’s students which improves my speaking skills and reduces stage fear. When I joined the corporate world, I realized all those skills are very important here.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, thus, for instance, i think, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10236220472 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93371287166 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0909019398 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112833756316 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416904705482 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501319956533 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836274155876 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244291426851 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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