At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Nowadays, sports and social activities have become a vital ingredient of human being's life. We use to quote and report mentioning sports cause healthiness and social activities are first ever steps of future evolvement. Following the reason, I highly believe sports and social activities are equilibrium to libraries and university/college classes and supporting them financially as libraries and classes is life-blood.
At the beginning, although being a traditional saying, sports and social activities are health insurance. Both hone us psychologically and mentally. as an example, I had a casual friend, who was a lecturer at Jami University. Once I asked about the effects of sports and social activities on life of his student. His respond astonished me, saying that sports and social activities enhance students brainstorming and strengthen their memory skill. for example, the act of recalling both in short and long term memories. Supporting the idea, he says, students with no showing off at social activities and sport, faced many problematic issues in route of recalling.
Secondly, sports and social activities are lessons human kind get used to enhance life functions. it looks absurd being known as tired and hermit guy in congestion of co-workers and friends. Since I am working at Afghanistan national hospital, I have been in contact with a tedious clerk, not vying with other employees or sharing his sensation about amusement and entertainment events. Moreover, he has not faced any enhancement in his work since he came into work, back in years.
In sum, I have definite faith on exclaiming the importance of sports and social activities and supporting them financially, in similarity with college and university class and libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41454545455 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07610572742 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7066005445 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344722007488 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114040129968 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1069244563 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226243157512 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102628808463 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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