Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people are of the opinion that universities and colleges should take attention to education and spend their financial supplies for educational goals rather than sports and social activities. while some other people believe that sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. I agree with the statement that sports and social activities should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

It goes without saying that students should have a joyful and active environment to attain their maximum performance. Hence universities and colleges should spend some money to create facilities for a student like sports gyms, clubs, social activities class and so forth. It is crystal clear that passive circumstances make students bored and their educational performance are affected significantly. This issue indicates that how much activities like sports or social classes are important.

Second, there are many fields and research area which are related to sports and social activities. And they need some facilities to develop their knowledge in their field of interest gyms and other equipment. undoubtedly they have the right as well as other fields students like engineering or medical science students. So universities and colleges have to provides their needs as well as other members. My friend, Ali, is a strong fan of handball sport and he is studying this field academically, too. as I mentioned before he needs some facilities to expand his knowledge on his field of study.

In a nutshell, I agree with the statement that sports and social classes should receive equal financial support as well as classes and libraries. This is because students need to joyful activities and give the same right to a student who studies field relevant to sports and social activities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, well, while, i feel, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31935483871 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74463624106 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470967741935 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7875786641 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319299158028 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127572597154 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164601214707 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232811517629 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156268754783 0.0645574589148 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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