If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details.
A subject that I would like to study is biomechanics and kinesiology. The main reason is because I am interested to understand exactly how the muscles are connected with the bones, and how it works to keep the human body moving healthy. Getting to know all theory from this subject I could solve many problems that I usually get through at the gym. Knowing exactly why I am doing a certain type of exercise to building muscles.
The human body is very much complex by the same time is magical. How do we move our bodies? How every part is connected to work in harmony: bones, joint, muscles, nerves and neurons? There are a lot of different cellular types connected in harmony to keep up everything working well. Personally, I love to go to the gym, and I guess that everyone that goes for exercise yourself in there, is looking for healthier and sometimes to get a beauty body shape. The principles of biomechanics and kinesiology explain the correct technique to perform each exercise at the gym and how to improve the execution according to the individual structure of each one’s body. Performing the exercises in the incorrect form we can injury ourselves instead of getting better. All these fascinating questions could be answered by biomechanical and kinesiology of human movements.
I love to study by myself at home, especially when I am interested in something. I like to go over studying a lot to learn new things. I have a personal motivation for study biomechanics and kinesiology, because everything new that I learn, I can practice just going to the gym. Doing this it is possible optimize my performance and muscular development at the gym. I have learned a lot studying on my own but if I have the opportunity to take a regular class to improve my knowledge, I will go for sure.
In summary, an opportunity to learn new things is always a good time. I think that we can learn everything that we like since we want. In particular, biomechanics and kinesiology are a passion to me, and I am curious and excited to know a bit more about.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ver studying a lot to learn new things. I have a personal motivation for study bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, i guess, i think, in particular, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68044077135 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89658384964 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6864967696 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.95 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077010844776 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253471281911 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359155094915 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486992444675 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323097027582 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.