If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
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Firstly, if I am knowledgeable about the human body I would be able to understand the reason behind ailments and know if it is benign or an indication of a more serious underlying condition. thus equipping me to take better care of myself and keep myself in perfect shape. For instance, if I have stiffness in my back, what is the reason for it? is it caused by bad posture? or is it a symptom of a more dangerous condition?
Secondly, if I am conscious of the working of the human body I would be able to derive insights from even the most obscured signs. For example, a friend of mine shows erratic behaviour and gives extreme reactions, I would understand him and know how to handle him. I would be able to give a better diagnosis than a doctor who doesn't know about his personal history and thus is oblivious of underlying causes. Therefore knowledge of medical sciences would help me take care of friends and family. I will be better equipped to handle situations than many people.
moreover, in case of an accident or emergency, I would be able to take command of the situation and be better equipped to access the damage and take abrest decisions. For example, if I came across an accident I would know if I should move the injured or how to give proper first-aid and which person to prioritize.
To recapitulate, if allowed to study a new subject, I would choose to study medicine as it will enable me to take better care of myself and keep me in tip-top shape, and equip me to identify any hidden diseases that may be affecting my friends and family. moreover, enabling me to be better equipped to handle emergency situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97994987469 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40731402768 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6189660776 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.882352941 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120572630698 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430176518231 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648200195218 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666995926016 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307534792673 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.