ILLNESSES CAUSED BY STRESS HAVE BEEN INCREASED. WHY?
With the very moment of stepping into the hustle and bustle of the life all people in the world are becoming more and more exposed to stressful situations and experiences. However, when we glance at our past we will definitely realize that the amount of stress in people’s daily lives has considerably increased in comparison with our ancestors. This, in turns, has set the stage for the huge boom in the number of diseases. Though there are various explanation for the main causes of stress, I would like to speak about the most discernible ones in the subsequent body paragraphs.
To commence with, the humanity has been encountering an unprecedented evolution in all aspects of life, including economy, industry and technology. These changes are in all walks of the life and surround us everywhere. The new edge-cutting innovations, discoveries and ground-breaking news constantly thrill, excite and cause anger to humanity. In other words, we are kind of getting used to being deprived from our tranquil life, always expecting something new. For example, people today are incessantly being told about the possible effects of global warming, pollution and economic disasters on their lives, hence, feeling worried about their security. So, this condition, in my opinion, brings a lot of stress and concern.
In addition, I would like to mention the paramount cause of stress for the time being, money. People, like ever before, are struggling to become reach and this; unfortunately, has become the main goal of their lives. Which is more awful, is that people today consider money to be omnipotent and able to provide them happiness, the sense of fulfilment and pride. And as we all know “money doesn’t grow on trees” and earning money is rather a strenuous process, requiring a lot of sufferings. Being involved in such process, obviously causes a lot stress and; therefore, further illnesses.
In the light of the aforementioned reasons, I will vehemently declare that money and the developing world are the main sources of stress and have had an adverse effects on humans’ health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...urces of stress and have had an adverse effects on humans' health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23099415205 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93604526885 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0606961372 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13749683161 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444038022469 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463329744243 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836942896263 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117513921323 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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