Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Preparing for trip is the hardest part of it. I admit that it is a tough decision to choose necessary items because carrying all stuff is a hinder in the trip. Although for some people it may seem unessential and heavy, I prefer to take my professional camera. Even if I have to reduce my personal items and clothing, I pick my camera in all trip.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that I am an amateur photographer so taking a lot of photos assist me to amend my mistakes. For example, after each trip and more than 1000 photos, my mentor choose 10 percent of them and advise me how to use my skills. Thus, each travel and journey gives me some new suggestions and experiences to modify my portfolios which is definitely precious for me.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that pictures are capture of moments and I enjoy to review them later. It is amazing to share my enjoyable memories which I went through them with my friends. For instance, the ancient Catholic church of Vatican and its amazing paintings draw attentions so not only can I convince my friends to visit this fabulous country sooner, but also it is like that I am experiencing those fantastic moments again and again. Hence, camera seize time for me and give me the opportunity to live in the specific time frame more than once.
Admittedly, it is not comfortable to bear camera’s accessories everywhere such as mountains or ocean. Sometimes I feel a bad backache then need to rest one day at hotel. Nevertheless, if I travel with my relatives, they help me to carry them because they know how much important it is for me. Furthermore, I understood that a standard backpack can eliminate this problem or make it easier.
Due to aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements taking camera in travel is very useful and beneficial especially if you go to trip a lot.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76851427309 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.556112378 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139086967511 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462842255824 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430472838203 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848752896719 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424913154824 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.