It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and example to develop your essay.
Our attitude and character is decided in the way how we are. But, not in the place where we grow. So, it is better for children to grow up in the countryside as well as in big city. I agree and at the same time I disagree with the above sentence. Now let us discuss about this point in this essay with examples.
Firstly, the reason why I agree is, in village every child will follow their culture and they know how to behave in front of others. Even to the child who grows up in the city will also know the culture and behaviour. But they lack in some or other way. For instance, if we go to any function or to the temple it is compulsory to wear traditional dress only the village side will follow this but not in city. So, it will be good to grow our children in country side.
Secondly, I also disagree to grow children in country side because, they don’t know about the technology and good education system. Not everyone in the country side will be educated and only few will lack in education in city side. For example, education is very important to everyone. Even the government has brought many schemes like free education and free food in schools.
Thus , every child should get proper education and grow up with cultural ethics. I conclude this essay with, country or city will not decide our behaviour. Our education and attitude towards others reflect our character.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ducation and free food in schools. Thus , every child should get proper education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52173913043 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35326391969 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509881422925 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7409883531 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2941176471 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176310153734 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646285921183 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922622317489 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11556988599 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763979906758 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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