Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When it comes to the selection between enjoy or save money, some people believe that we live in present, so we should spend money to enjoy our life. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this decision on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that we can enjoy more our live. Nowadays, most people are working all day long and save their money, while they do not allocate time and budget for leisure or recreational activities. Hence, it is quite normal that they almost feel low, because they do not live at present. They want to save their money to cope with unforeseen problems in the future, which is unpredictable and may not occur. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. Imagine a person who works hard and saves great percentage of his salary, because he wishes to have a comfortable life in the future. Suddenly, he is hit by a taxi and died. So, do you think his efforts for having a better life fruitful?
A further point we must consider is that we can assist the government to make more job opportunities by avoiding of save money. From the economic angle, money should be circulated in economic cycle, which allows the government to have enough budgets for making carriers. For achieve this, plenty of governments impose a high tax on banking account in order to encourage people to participate in the economic activities. I think that there is not a better instance than me when I was studying in the university, which was in California. At that time, I as a student did not get any financial support from my parents and the university, had to work in a cafeteria, which is near my dormitory. While, I had not received enough salary, I concluded that saving could not change my life considerably. Hence, some of my friends and I decided to run a small programming firm. In the beginning, we have many unforeseen problems and the firm was not profitable. After ten years, we were able to expand our business and hired about fifty employees. Therefore, I think that we never can be a successful, if we saved money for unpredictable future.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that spending money not only allows us to enjoy more of our live, but also leads economic to growth as quickly as possible. Last but not least, I hope that people gain the deeper insight of the real means of living and do not worry about problems, which may happen in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... worry about problems, which may happen in future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.185628742515 0.229887763892 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.171656686627 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101796407186 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0558882235529 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0858283433134 0.0685040099705 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117764471058 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0199600798403 0.0351676179071 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58829645511 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0279441117764 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0798403193613 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199600798403 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159680638723 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2521.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 448.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62723214286 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305803571429 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209821428571 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140625 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0915178571429 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58829645511 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533482142857 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 62.3161747444 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5186313303 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.041666667 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.6488095238 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.03184713376 1.45489161554 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337174310226 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0784235080557 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0607730576652 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.406024144587 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126050049966 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103845600124 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687794251344 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328220027185 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0653294411182 0.067059652881 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229607569787 0.210909579961 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655421891094 0.0618886996521 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.