Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
When it comes to the issue the importance of studying abroad, some people believe that students who study in foreign country possess plenty of advantages. However, others have the opposite view, and think that studying out of home country impose heavy costs on students. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that students can gain more knowledge. In the foreign country, you are able to contact with plenty of students and teachers from different country, religious or race. This condition allows you to become more familiar with diversity of point of views about every thing. In addition, your exposure to many kinds of people not only improve your people skills, but also give the firmer knowledge of others, both foe and friends. Also, you have a proper situation for learning at least one foreign language, because you can communicate with native people. So, the biggest advantage of studying in foreign country lies in the fact that assists us to learn more.
A further point we must consider is that study far from home country lead us to improve our personality. When you travel to a foreign country, it is quite normal you will be face new challenges which you have to deal with them. Moreover, you learn to be self-motive, eager to embrace challenges, and handle unforeseen problems. I think that there is not a better example than myself, when I was studying on abroad. At that time, I did not receive enough money from my family or the university, so I had to learn how to manage my financial sources. I learn to wake up at early morning, use public transportation for commuting, and manage my time for studying and work as the same time.
Apart from points I made above, students can have access more job opportunities by studying on abroad. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. Every year, many students from poor countries apply for universities in Western Developed countries. These countries have the better economic conditions, so a student can easily find a decent career there.
All above evidence supports the undeniable face that students who study in foreign country gain more knowledge, have the strong character, and have access more job opportunities. Of course, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that students have to pay much money for continue their education on abroad. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that its profits outweigh dangerous.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'apart from', 'at least', 'i think', 'in addition', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218436873747 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.152304609218 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108216432866 0.0866891130778 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521042084168 0.046263068375 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0661322645291 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12625250501 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0140280561122 0.0351676179071 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.63379184905 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280561122244 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00200400801603 0.00188951952338 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.0741482965932 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140280561122 0.0209618222197 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160320641283 0.0139019557991 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2627.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 440.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97045454545 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361363636364 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281818181818 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102272727273 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63379184905 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.2722667007 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1304347826 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1666150985 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.217391304 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1304347826 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 47.3122529644 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.32592592593 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211870891118 0.300154397459 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0900479652906 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0754246818838 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463499113129 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111649604381 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702456187598 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455485199488 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24341788622 0.336927656856 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108877798381 0.067059652881 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130881341481 0.210909579961 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197469242068 0.0618886996521 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.