Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to plenty of studentssupport your answer.

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Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to plenty of studentssupport your answer.

Education has very important place in people’s lives. The most important part of it is university education. Because according to the field of major the rest of their life will be shaped. There are a lot of options where to continue their education. Some choose their own country but , plenty of students prefer to study in a foreign country because of the benefits of it such as quality of education, learning a different language and to avoid family pressure.
To begin with, there are many well-known universities abroad like Harvard, Oxford and others. Graduates of these universities take important place all over the world. The achievement of them, the university have a big part. Since, the system and lecturer give a great perspective to the students. In addition to this, these kind of universities never give information, they lead to how to use data and transform it to knowledge. Moreover, famous companies give priority to these schools graduates to recruit.
Secondly, we live in technological era. Thus, we need to follow new developments and to do this, we must learn foreign language. Moreover, finding a job is very difficult and a foreign language is the first criteria for almost all companies. It is because of this, having a different language make you one step forward between your opponents. The best way of this is to be in a place in which everybody speak that language. It is the another reason why students want to continue their education abroad.
Lastly, students give importance to their freedom. They do not want to live with their parents and they do not want to answer them about how their schools goes. They need to demonstrate themselves that they can handle the difficulties of life alone. Furthermore, when they go on their education in home country, they feel the neighborhood pressure as well, and it brings about low motivation of them.
In conclusion, there are a lot of factors to keep on education abroad.The deduction of past experiences illustrate that students who want to have a qualified education in a qualified school,who want to have a foreign language very well, and who do not want to feel pressure choose abroad to study.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9591280654 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85403716148 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512261580381 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2175961203 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235885972531 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587671339488 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645305272382 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114781463901 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169028146696 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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