it has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan ? Why? use specific reasons and details in your answer.
One of the life essential requirements is education and in order to have a mature and well educated generation we have to build more schools. So, I really do support to build a new high school in any community for several reasons, which will be discussed in the essay.
Firstly, it enhances the chances in the community for unemployment people to get a job. For instance, the school will require having administration in order to manage the school and also requires instructors for the sake of teaching and this could be as a benefit for teachers who had to go away to get what do they want . Furthermore, once the school is established the number of houses and their values around the school will be increased and it will play a big role in the economy in the community and that will affect the community positively.
Secondly, it is one of the advantages that students are not compelled to travel in order to get their education and beside that parents will not need to drop by their children and that in both ways cost them less and save their time. For example, some families do not afford money to transport their kids every day and some families feel more comfortable if the school beside home and by this way can avoid traffic issues. One more advantage is you can have night shift courses and this benefit has impacts on the students in long term.
To sum up that, some people do believe that the announcement of building a new high school will adversely affect the environment and the usages of buses will lead to traffic issues and air pollution. However, I agree that the announcement will have some disadvantages but the features and advantages of the announcement will be more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... had to go away to get what do they want . Furthermore, once the school is establi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tages of the announcement will be more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66333333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64496064682 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.363021718 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.9 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133793150192 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601180360741 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497544013479 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897227889326 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248265713528 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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