It is important to keep your old friends than is to make new friends
Friends are one of most imperative part of anyone's life. They are the ones with whom we share our miseries and happy moments. Almost anyone's life without good friends would be incomplete. The reading here states that it is important to keep your old friends than it is make to new friends. I partially agree with this claim and feel that it is importnat to keep your old friends along with the new friends that one make.
First, it is important for one to keep one's old friends. They are old friends because they already know and understand you better. In addition to that we have a lot memories with them. For instance, let us take an example of my old friend who knows me very well. That is, particulary how would I feel when I am sad and what kind of things I prefer to do when I am sad. Since, he knows that I prefer going to coffe shop whenever I feel sad he takes me to the coffe shop at that moment which relaxes me a bit. This example illustrates how an old friend who knows you better can soothe you when you are sad. Hence, it is very important to keep your old friends with you.
Second, making new friends is very important as one would learn a lot of new things from them. In addition to learning one will get different view of some things after making new friends. For instance, when I wanted to research about cloud computing in my college I was very afraid of the complexities involved in it until I met a new friend who had a very good understanding of cloud computing. He completely changed my perspective towards the research in cloud computing by explaining the important things in it and how one can start research on it with these minimal things. Thus, this example of mine illustrated how one can learn new things from friends and how it can change one's perspective towards different things in world. Hence, it is imperative to make good friends
In conclusion, I feel that one should neither ignore their old friends nor they should stop from making new friends. It is important to strike balance between making new friends and keeping old friends which will help them learn new things as well keep the people that you are more comfortable with with you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.475 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3783187339 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9405882317 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490488284092 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186627053401 0.076458572812 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181512736766 0.0737576698707 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361537530937 0.150856017488 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130454056377 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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