It is important thing that parent should spend a specific time with their kids, whether they will use that time to have fun by playing games or sport or use time by sharing them doing homework this can be weighted in many aspects. Some parent prefers to enjoy their time with their children by playing or going to the gym, other believe doing homework and study is more beneficial than playing, to me I definitely prefer to spend my time with my kids by playing games or doing their hobby like swimming or playing basketball. In the following paragraphs I will elaborates on a couple of reasons with compelling examples to explain my point of view.
First, and paramount reason is, playing with our kids is beneficial, this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so our kids will enjoy and relax from longs study week days, for example, my daughter is in the seven grade, she has school every day, five days in the week, a lot of homework, assignments and tests, therefore after she finished her duty she need time to relax and to make fun, hence she ask me and her dad to play chess or paper, and as we know these type of playing can help our kids in math subject and expand their horizon, therefore we cannot inforce her to do homework or study to gather, just check with her that she did her academic work then spend free time by playing, farther more when we do that she feel more comfortable with positive energy to start her next school day.
Second, the other reason springing to my mind, there are a lot of studies say that health brain in health body, moreover, playing sport like swimming or soccer is very important to our kids health, especially in these days many kids suffer from obesity, therefore it is a crucial thing to engage our children with playing sport and share with them their interest, as a result we will strong the relationship between us, and let them free to tell as any concern that they may have without any hesitate. As you can see the advantages of spending enjoyable time with our kids.
To sum up, the statement that spending time with youngesters by playing or do something enjoy with it is as persuasive as it stands, this is baced on exposition that mentions above, that make fun and play games with our kids will help them to overcome any difficulty in their life by building a strong relationship between them and their parent, in addition to make them feel relax from hard school days and give them energy to return back to their study
It is important thing that parent should spend a specific time with their kids, whether they will use that time to have fun by playing games or sport or use time by sharing them doing homework this can be weighted in many aspects. Some parent prefers to enjoy their time with their children by playing or going to the gym, other believe doing homework and study is more beneficial than playing, to me I definitely prefer to spend my time with my kids by playing games or doing their hobby like swimming or playing basketball. In the following paragraphs I will elaborates on a couple of reasons with compelling examples to explain my point of view.
First, and paramount reason is, playing with our kids is beneficial, this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so our kids will enjoy and relax from longs study week days, for example, my daughter is in the seven grade, she has school every day, five days in the week, a lot of homework, assignments and tests, therefore after she finished her duty she need time to relax and to make fun, hence she ask me and her dad to play chess or paper, and as we know these type of playing can help our kids in math subject and expand their horizon, therefore we cannot inforce her to do homework or study to gather, just check with her that she did her academic work then spend free time by playing, farther more when we do that she feel more comfortable with positive energy to start her next school day.
Second, the other reason springing to my mind, there are a lot of studies say that health brain in health body, moreover, playing sport like swimming or soccer is very important to our kids health, especially in these days many kids suffer from obesity, therefore it is a crucial thing to engage our children with playing sport and share with them their interest, as a result we will strong the relationship between us, and let them free to tell as any concern that they may have without any hesitate. As you can see the advantages of spending enjoyable time with our kids.
To sum up, the statement that spending time with youngesters by playing or do something enjoy with it is as persuasive as it stands, this is baced on exposition that mentions above, that make fun and play games with our kids will help them to overcome any difficulty in their life by building a strong relationship between them and their parent, in addition to make them feel relax from hard school days and give them energy to return back to their study
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: elaborate
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Suggestion: asks
...ime to relax and to make fun, hence she ask me and her dad to play chess or paper, ...
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... energy to start her next school day. Second, the other reason springing to my...
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...hat they may have without any hesitate. As you can see the advantages of spending ...
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Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ard school days and give them energy to return back to their study
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29025368956 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466814159292 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.1344086022 318% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.76300575 48.9658058833 477% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.571428571 100.406767564 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5714285714 20.6045352989 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.7142857143 5.45110844103 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486517676041 0.236089414692 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282673280664 0.076458572812 370% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.244396704266 0.0737576698707 331% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32730118772 0.150856017488 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20139014542 0.0645574589148 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 11.7677419355 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.44 58.1214874552 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.71 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.0537634409 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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