It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
Friends are quite important in one's life. Life without a friend is same as food without salt ,that is, tasteless . Friends are the one after family that are near and dear to you and with whom you share most of the time. Personally I believe that it is better to be with old friends rather than making new friends.I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, old friends know our nature,our likes and dislikes,so they would mostly help us in difficult times and they know how to rejoice our mind when we are sad.My own experience is a compelling example of this,during my high school I failed in chemistry exam and I was quite depressed as this was the first time I had failed in any subject. My friend named Raju, who lives in my neighborhood is a very good and old friend of mine figured this out and helped me to get out of my depression. He motivated me by stating my past accomplishments and told that rather than being depressed you should put up your socks to tackle further challenges. He told me that 'Failures are the stepping stones to success'. Instead of crying in for my past failures I should learn from my failures and try to improve them. I really got motivated that day by the words of my friend and till now my academics performance is good and consistent.
Secondly, old friends are more reliable than new friends. As the world consists of many strangers we could not identify the hidden intention behind the person.So in today's world it is quite risky to make a new friend as they can exploit us and merely just make use of us for their benefits. For instance, my classmate had recently made a new friend and knowing that my classmate is rich that new friend somehow figured it out from my classmate about where he keeps his money and precious things. That new friend of my classmate robbed his house and stole all the things that my classmate stated him. Another example would be one of my old friend, Brijesh, who during a walk saw my wallet has by mistakenly fallen on the ground from my back pocket and he reported it to me rather than stealing it as wallet contained a large amount of cash. This shows us that old friends are quite reliable and can be trusted.
In conclusion, I strongly believe to keep the friendship strong with old friends rather than making new friends. This is because old friends know our behavior and past very well and would be help us during our bad times and old friends are also reliable and can be trusted compared to new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45689655172 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41956606007 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487068965517 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9466907013 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.888888889 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349251720079 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132878816055 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130590345779 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247486685412 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100432304518 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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