It is a waste of money for the government to spend money on space exploration
Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, thus the government are more wealthy and rich in the financial head space, which makes a bunch of government officers are considering to allocate funds to explore the space and exploit the space resources. However, personally speaking, I cannot concur with this opinion. I contend that more fiscal funds should be distributed to other meaningful fields which are in imperative needs for monetary supports and my view can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, the regime is supposed to distribute more funds to combat the problem of environment protection. Nowadays, owing to the excessive construction both in rural and urban areas, there is an increasing numbers of lands suffering from irreversible contamination that is burdersome to eliminate. Meanwhile, with the expansion of the middle class, private cars become prevalent, hence, the proliferation of private-owned cars emits escalating exhaust fumes and triggers many problems related to the air quality, which makes tremendous people being buedened with such issues. Based on the numerous emission, the city dwellers have been haunted by smog caused by the emission for months, which exerts detrimental effects on their health, especially their respiratory fitness. Under this circumstance, firm measures must be taken by the Bureau of the environment and natural resource to curb the expansion of contamination. To be more specific, the authority ought to give fiscal support to conglomerates to develop their technology to creat environmentally-friendly cars which consume less petroleumn and emit less carbon dioxide, such as the technology to employ hydrogen, a kind of renewable and environmentally-friendly resource as cars' driving force. Plus, the government is also capable of setting facile goals for factories who generate pollution. Whenever they achieve the contamination-reduction goals, they are entitled to receive monetary rewards given by the authority, thus forming a virtuous cycle to better address the environment issues. Eventually, the problem of contamination can be
What's more, the authority also should attach more attention in the construction of public transits. Since the government liberates citizens from the constraint of the one-child policy, according to the demographic results, the population inhabiting in a specific metropolis is ever rising, which imposes more burdens on the operation of transportation. Provided that the publich is not well-estabished, more people will have a preference for utilizing private cars, which further exacerbates the problem of traffic congestion. At the aim of solving the problem from the root, it is imperative for the regime to allocate more funds to accelerate the construction of public transportation, for instance, the magnetically-leviated trains, the buses, the underground, so as to better accomodate city dwellers' desire for the convenience of traveling around.
Admittedly, funding the exploration of space is also of great significance and each country is endeavoring to get the headstart in the space weapon rivalry. Nevertheless, compared with the serious problems that requires us to grapple with more urgently, it is optimal for us to give priority to the mentioned fields.
In a nutshell, I would like to reiterate my opinion that considering the current conditions of the development of our country, spending money on exploring outerspace is a waste of money and it is more meaningful to give priority to the fields that are in imperative desires for fiscal assistance, such as the environment protection, the erection of public transits and other fields that are enslaved by urgent plagues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 37.0 8.0752688172 458% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3174.0 1977.66487455 160% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61769911504 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44288233855 2.67179642975 129% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532743362832 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 1002.6 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4080671368 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.333333333 100.406767564 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3888888889 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206155504451 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525459378944 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733298928983 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127777445543 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788560737368 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 58.1214874552 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 190.0 86.8835125448 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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