Now days with the increase in the complexity of life, there are many duties put on individuals especially young people to improve and facilitate their life. Whether it is parameter things for young people to plan or organize in their life or not, this can be evaluated in many aspects, to me I concur with pervious statement, that youngster should be able to plan and organize in order to save their time and get a perfect result in any task they might do, in the following essayI will elaborated to a couple reasons to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and foremost, good planning and arrangement can help us to manage our time and we can finish early without waste our time. If we used to make schedule to our duties according to the priorety , then we put plan, when and how to do it, this will make us finish in the correct time. This is example from my real life, when I was in the high school, my passion is to be a dentist, therefore I work hard to figure out which subject will be benefit to me with this field in order to take them in the collage to enable me to attend dental school, hence I took biology classes in addition to chemistry to increase my credit and help me to enroll in this school, as a result, I finished my study in the perfect time and became doctor, from my experience, we can figure out the importance of organization to reach to our goals in suitable time.
Furthermore, when we plan to something, and study all possibilities that may occur, we will be able to do our best with good result, this is due to the fact that, we can be able to recognize each advantages and disadvantages any step, this will make us to be aware about everything, since we do it successfully.
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands, this is based on my exposition that I mentioned above, It is very essential to everyone to be able to plan and organize his work to make him finish his duty in the time, in addition, this help him to do the task correctly.
Now days with the increase in the complexity of life, there are many duties put on individuals especially young people to improve and facilitate their life. Whether it is parameter things for young people to plan or organize in their life or not, this can be evaluated in many aspects, to me I concur with pervious statement, that youngster should be able to plan and organize in order to save their time and get a perfect result in any task they might do, in the following essayI will elaborated to a couple reasons to explain my point of view in this subject.
First, and foremost, good planning and arrangement can help us to manage our time and we can finish early without waste our time. If we used to make schedule to our duties according to the priorety , then we put plan, when and how to do it, this will make us finish in the correct time. This is example from my real life, when I was in the high school, my passion is to be a dentist, therefore I work hard to figure out which subject will be benefit to me with this field in order to take them in the collage to enable me to attend dental school, hence I took biology classes in addition to chemistry to increase my credit and help me to enroll in this school, as a result, I finished my study in the perfect time and became doctor, from my experience, we can figure out the importance of organization to reach to our goals in suitable time.
Furthermore, when we plan to something, and study all possibilities that may occur, we will be able to do our best with good result, this is due to the fact that, we can be able to recognize each advantages and disadvantages any step, this will make us to be aware about everything, since we do it successfully.
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands, this is based on my exposition that I mentioned above, It is very essential to everyone to be able to plan and organize his work to make him finish his duty in the time, in addition, this help him to do the task correctly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32446808511 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53772831709 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48670212766 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.854092747 48.9658058833 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.285714286 100.406767564 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.7142857143 20.6045352989 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 5.45110844103 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353627382366 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217223867624 0.076458572812 284% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.249597899441 0.0737576698707 338% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239307086614 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.25557623779 0.0645574589148 396% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 11.7677419355 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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