When it comes to the issue the importance of easy methods to prepare foods, some people believe that these approaches lead people to have better life. However, others have the different view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that fast food save time and energy. In fact, the time means a lot for modern people. It can mean money for businessmen, knowledge for school students, and profits for companies. Hence, people tend to do their job as quick as possible, and save time for significant objects. Fast foods eliminate the hustle for spending several hours front of the stove to cook meals. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. I am working in an electronic company, which is near California as a manager. It is quite normal that I prefer to allocate a great my time to work, so I have not enough time for cooking. In this way, I can cook a delicious food in ten minuets, because new foods do not need complex instruction and time for preparing.
A further point we must consider is that, fast foods makes people’s life convenient. Indeed, cooking is cumbersome for most people, because they can not learn many cooking instruction. Therefore, having access foods, which is prepared easily, lets them to meets their needs. I think that there is not a better example than myself when I was a first student in the university. At that time, I as a student who left home for first time, had not enough experience about independent life. The cooking was a great predicament for me, because I even did not able to cook a simple meal. Eventually, I solved my problems by use of fast foods, which allows me to do not worry about cooking and puts various selections for meals at my disposal.
In contrast, overuse of fast foods makes people to become fat, which is the cause of many illnesses like heart attack, stroke, high blood pressure, and diabetes. A recent scientific research show that more than 70 percent of school students suffer of obesity. I admit that overuse of everything even water can bring some negative consequences, while it is a parents’ obligation to supervise their children and do not allow them to use fast foods frequently.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that modern people need the easy method to prepare foods, because it can save time and energy and makes their life comfortable. However, as an English proverb goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that overuse of fast foods makes people obesity. However, I strongly believe that its advantages outweigh dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: MINUETS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'minutes'?
Suggestion: minutes
...way, I can cook a delicious food in ten minuets, because new foods do not need complex ...
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to complex'?
Suggestion: to complex
... minuets, because new foods do not need complex instruction and time for preparing. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think', 'in contrast', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249541284404 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.146788990826 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100917431193 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.051376146789 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0623853211009 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111926605505 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0128440366972 0.0351676179071 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.6124212992 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0256880733945 0.0309702414327 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0752293577982 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128440366972 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146788990826 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2755.0 2387.08602151 115% => OK
No of words: 472.0 408.028673835 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83686440678 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326271186441 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243644067797 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156779661017 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101694915254 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6124212992 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 62.677683298 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1538461538 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0560523404 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.961538462 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 42.5182529335 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.43661971831 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211510817752 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0704350732533 0.103427244359 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0467725322154 0.0752933317313 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.435464531292 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123640784825 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667849530031 0.114077575197 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052351552593 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310376619638 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0734752101299 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14269064026 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404617334262 0.0618886996521 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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