Since their invention, the fast food restaurants and microwaves have been popular because of their speed in preparation of food, they have both negative and positive aspects on society. What are the intangibles that make them have benefits? Therefore, I would use them if I have to save time.
First of all, the repercussions of fast food restaurants and microwaves, they are the main cause that people get fat because they do not give healthy food to customers, only food with carbohydrates and proteins. Furthermore, people do not make any effort to create a new recipe which does not help to stimulate imagination and creativity in the cousine skills. Moreover, people who eat this food can hurt their health because these meals increase the cholesterol and glucose in their body. For example, my younger brother ate fast food three times per week for two months, so he got sick and his blood exams showed that he had high cholesterol.
However, they have positive impacts on society, hard worker people consume this kind of food because they do not have enough time to cook, so it helps to eat something when they arrive tired at home. Besides, many of the people do not know how to cook, hence, it is helpful for them because they can get full quickly. Also, many families take advantage of these inventions to create good timing with their family, they can meet and eat together and focus only on themselves without any concern. For instance, my experience is a great example, I live alone, so when I go home I prefer to buy fast food like hamburgers because I am exhausted from work.
On one hand, one can get fat if they only eat in fast food restaurants; nonetheless, one can eat vegetarian food or avoid buying fatty food like fries chips. On the other hand, they stop improving their cuisine skills; but, many of the people meet with their family or friends to eat fast food and have a happy time. By the same token, they can increase the levels of problems in the health of body’s body; nevertheless, one can change the restaurant, there are a lot of options where one can buy and prove a different the taste or type of food.
To conclude, although fast food restaurants and microwaves have positives and negative impacts on society, I believe that they are beneficial to society. The feeding today is faster.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73955773956 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54658318826 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520884520885 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6147462459 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5625 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4375 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 5.45110844103 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260467789145 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929263644536 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888157971035 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173909358957 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448674899926 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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