Often, we are required to participate in group projects at school or work. Sometimes we must work with the people who share our opinions and ideas However, sometimes we must work with the people who have completely different opinions than us. Which option do you prefer? Use reasons and example in your answer.
Group projects are important to improve various skills in our lives. It helps people to improvise numerous soft skills and team building skill. Some people believe that for group project they should work with the people who do not share the same ideas; others disagree. In my view, people who share the same opinion should work as a team because when I work in a group project; It helps me to solve the problem quickly and accurately. I will elaborate on my reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
First, when people work as a team, they are not only become more invested in the project, but they also become devoted to each other. Team members support each other and adopt each other’s working styles. The team relationship may result in trustworthy friendship. That leads to offering a hand on other assignments and sharing ideas or brainstorms to push one another along to reach personal and professional goals. For example, when I was working as a PT(Physical therapist) in India, I got an assignment of taking the assessment of patients at free camp, which was organized by a non-profitable organization. In that camp, I had to work with other newly joined Physical therapists, who were having the same ideas to work as a team to take an assessment of all patients; So, we were able to complete all patients’ assessments on time. Not only that, but we also became good friends after that meeting.
Second, another key advantage of group work in the office is that it can increase efficiency. When a group with the shared opinions assigned a project or task, they tend to get more work done than an individual who struggles to complete a task without any support. A group with a shared approach can also lead to cost savings for your business because it can increase productivity without requiring you to hire more employees. Group work shared opinions also helps your business to meet individual and team goals more quickly and more people stay committed to the project. While when team members disagree with each other’s ideas, the project work takes more time than predicted and sometimes project get postponed as well. For instance, in PT school I got an assignment to work on, but my team was not able to come to any conclusion of on which topic we should present our assignment; And we ended up missing our due date for our assignment submission.
In conclusion, group work is the essence of learning various soft skills and team building skill, but I believe that it only possible when a person has team members who share the same ideas and opinions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... who share the same ideas and opinions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80630630631 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6725343285 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477477477477 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8798176144 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.315789474 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36781127298 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113453621158 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793068144282 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228487386965 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800731356155 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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