Parents have an essential influence on their kids' emotional and psychological behavior. Father and mother should spend enough time with their kids. Controversial question is which is better, spend spare time with children by doing schoolwork or have fun? This can be weight in many aspects.
admittedly, some people believe, parents and their kids should have fun and play together when their is chance of having enough time. Moreover, they are both need to relax and ventilate their pressure from hard week work, but, in my perspective, if I have enough time, I would like to spend that time with my kids by helping them doing their school homework, or, explain to them any subject that they struggling with. In the following essay, I will share my reason to explain my point of view.
The important reason is, we can help our kids to improve their academic achievement and get high scores which will help them to finish their study with a good GP, Moreover, they can attend to a suitable college. It it very important when parents take care of kids' education and try to make them focus on their study by monitor their classes and help them to ingest subjects. Take my experience as a compelling example, I used to ask my daughter about her classes and always try to teach her especially math. As a result, she became very smart and she took advance classes in math. As a conclusion, spend time with our kids by teaching them will improve their commitments.
In addition, other important reason springs to my mind, by doing so this will strength the bond between parent and their young kids, they give both of them opportunity to be close to each other. Furthermore, kids will feel how their parent pay attention to their kids education. Also, they will be aware about the importance of education to build a good future career.
Parents have an essential influence on their kids' emotional and psychological behavior. Father and mother should spend enough time with their kids. Controversial question is which is better, spend spare time with children by doing schoolwork or have fun? This can be weight in many aspects.
admittedly, some people believe, parents and their kids should have fun and play together when their is chance of having enough time. Moreover, they are both need to relax and ventilate their pressure from hard week work, but, in my perspective, if I have enough time, I would like to spend that time with my kids by helping them doing their school homework, or, explain to them any subject that they struggling with. In the following essay, I will share my reason to explain my point of view.
The important reason is, we can help our kids to improve their academic achievement and get high scores which will help them to finish their study with a good GP, Moreover, they can attend to a suitable college. It it very important when parents take care of kids' education and try to make them focus on their study by monitor their classes and help them to ingest subjects. Take my experience as a compelling example, I used to ask my daughter about her classes and always try to teach her especially math. As a result, she became very smart and she took advance classes in math. As a conclusion, spend time with our kids by teaching them will improve their commitments.
In addition, other important reason springs to my mind, by doing so this will strength the bond between parent and their young kids, they give both of them opportunity to be close to each other. Furthermore, kids will feel how their parent pay attention to their kids education. Also, they will be aware about the importance of education to build a good future career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Admittedly
...? This can be weight in many aspects. admittedly, some people believe, parents and their...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... should have fun and play together when their is chance of having enough time. Moreov...
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Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to do' or 'do'.
Suggestion: to do; do
... that time with my kids by helping them doing their school homework, or, explain to t...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: It
... they can attend to a suitable college. It it very important when parents take care o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76175548589 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46843657317 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3868171462 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.266666667 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507810905193 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199923909868 0.076458572812 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191422583226 0.0737576698707 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.385732178028 0.150856017488 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.292089391336 0.0645574589148 452% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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