People enjoy the most in his life during his young days than his old days. Do you agree with the statement? If yes state with examples and if no state with examples.
Scores of people around the world held their own belief towards life and they discuss with other people and they choose to live on their own way. Some choose to say life will be better at young age while some may not. I also have my own opinion of life and I guess somebody truly and immeasurably enjoys his most part of life during his old age because of several reasons. And older people enjoy definitely because of reasons mentioned below.
For the first reason, after tremendous efforts during his young age somebody will be able to cope any circumstances in coming days. Man is a social animal and he will be experienced through his daily activities. His everyday experience for long time period will be beneficial for him to strengthen himself physically as well as behaviorally. Moreover, he will have his collected funds being deposited for imminent future of life directly supports them to enjoy in old age. For example, a retired army officer will get exquisite chance of celebrating days with the money and love he had achieved in his earlier days. Isn't there ould be created a scenario of family adventure? Can't those people utilize their collected fund for improving their affluent lifestyle? At this point life will be full of joviality and prosperous.
For second reason, older people will have chance of getting huge support from his family in his older days from his sons and family. Everybody loves old people, their father or mother. For example, any person always supports his son financially for his better study and future. A concerning and salubrious parents always worry about their children health and education. So isn't there will be a chance of expecting help from his children? Isn't any parents who has supported his children has right to get secured care and love in return at the age when parents become unable to work for themself. So eventually parents get help and care from their family that sometimes they will be allowed to have joyful moments together. What could be a happy enjoyment for somebody in having a better and family?
But at some cases, teenager or young people who keep vision of enjoying at present days do not necessarily mean they will not enjoy in their future. Some young prefer to enjoy at present time but it doesn't mean they forget their future. Those who are unconcerned about their goal in future always rests himself being sybarite. But for those young ones who think life is also for enjoyment at some part of life enjoy at present days.
To conclude, any person who is industrious in his vision and laborious from his earlier days are more likely to get enjoyment from his life. Struggling person always can make his life better. So struggling and fun should be in balanced at several steps of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, for example, i guess, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80962343096 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39950498358 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479079497908 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3985755918 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1481481481 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7037037037 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7037037037 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265639446829 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816616894072 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669071982901 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173845236835 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457764206635 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.