people learn things better from those at their own level like friends than from teachers. agree or not

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people learn things better from those at their own level like friends than from teachers. agree or not

Learning is a process of requiring knowledge which demands time. It does not matter the source. It can be made through friends, teachers or even family members. Some people think that it is easier to learn from friends at own levels. However, others believe otherwise, that it is much better to get knowledge from teachers whose knowledge are higher from them. It is agreeable to say that we learn more with teachers than friends.
Firstly, teachers have a higher level of education than our friend do. They have years of experience about many subjects and when good at teaching, they may convey the information in an easily way that everybody can fathom it. As an example, when in college I had difficulties in understanding maths. Then, a friend of mine told me about a math teacher nearby. I took his course and by the end of that year at college I overcame every other my classmates. My grades only kept going up afterwords.
Secondly, teachers have been through life experience that our friends have not. Not only by studying through books but visiting in local did they get information. And, that it is one of the most important source of way to find it and to pass such information on that make them stronger than any friends. Because when we try something, we see it, we touch it, it is very different than just by covering books.
However, there are some occasions where we can learn from friends. For instance, if we are in a study group preparing for a coming test, there are always some friends who know about a specific subject while others know another and so on. Then, we gather all the needed information and do our best in the test. Besides, we can corroborate with our friends. Maybe they may not know what we know and we change knowledge.
Finally, teachers are our best tools to get knowledge from and they will be ready to help us with everything that we might need.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('easily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('way') instead of another adjective.
...ing, they may convey the information in an easily way that everybody can fathom it. As an exa...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...e it, we touch it, it is very different than just by covering books. However, ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61424332344 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49360583732 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4935180478 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6818181818 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174115109818 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542224877626 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817253450938 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994771412107 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081955894739 0.0645574589148 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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